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Novel Revision on My Mind

IMG_1616Outside at a friend’s party in Pleasanton to see tonight’s sunset.

IMG_1640On the patio after the stunning view. I’m thinking of the changes I need to make on one page in my novel before tomorrow morning. It’s the last day of Jessica Barksdale’s writing retreat. Each participant will read a revision of a page that needs clarification.  My assignment is  where I wrote that Jill’s sister inherited the family home. People wondered why Jill didn’t get half of the inheritance. The real reason is explained several chapters later, but Jessica suggested I at least write how Jill felt about it.

Back to work on it at midnight.

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Novel Revisions

Revision catI’m preparing for a garage sale scheduled in two days and I’m revising 10,000 words of my novel due for a contest on the same day. Actually, taking breaks from boxes of stuff to files on the computer made multitasking a good thing.

One more day to get it all done.

Revision with Grumpy-Cat

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