September 28, 2014 · 4:27 pm
The blog hop continues with Vi Moore, one of the writers I tagged.
Tag was a childhood game that taxed my running skills. I did my best to stay out of reach of the person who was “it,” but my short legs were no match for my long-legged nephews and friends. When the tagger touched me, he yelled “You’re it!”
When Julaina Kleist-Corwin tagged me in a blog hop, I didn’t run. I accepted the challenge. Meet Julaina.
Julaina Kleist-Corwin teaches creative writing for the City of Dublin, California and has been a presenter at the San Francisco Writers Conference. Julaina has won several short story contests. Her work is published in The California Writers Club Literary Review, Harlequin’s 2012, 2013 Christmas anthologies, and other collections. She writes Women’s Fiction, YA, and multidimensional romantic mysteries.
In Norman and the Painting, the man of Jill’s dreams appears out of a painting. Jill has to discover how to keep him from constantly…
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September 4, 2014 · 8:48 am
My last post from Violet’s Vibes had examples of misplaced modifiers. Here a few more from Bonnie Trenga’s book, The Curious Case of the Misplaced Modifier, a Writers Digest Book. She explains that since a modifier usually describes the nearest noun, when it ends up next to the wrong word, it becomes misplaced. Here are some examples from her book:
“After robbing the bank, a plane took the thief to the Bahamas.” So the plane robbed a bank?
Corrected: “After robbing the bank, the thief flew to the Bahamas.”
“As a law-abiding citizen, red lights never get run when I’m around.” Red lights are law-abiding citizens?
Corrected: “As a law-abiding citizen, I never run red lights.”
“The stranger in the ugly coat I honked at turned out to be my traffic court judge, so I later regretted being rude.” She honked at the ugly coat?
Corrected: “I honked at a stranger in an ugly coat, but I later regretted being rude because he turned out to be my traffic court judge.”
If you find some misplaced modifiers in your writing, send them in to the comments. Examples are fun.
September 3, 2014 · 7:55 am
Misplaced modifiers sneak into our writing, but if we catch them, they’re good for laughs. Violet tells us about a mustache weighing 150 pounds, a chair tying its shoes, and a dog packing up for college.
In a search for heart medication information, I read this this important warning.
Do not take this medication if you have ever had a heart attack without first consulting your physician.
What if I don’t have time to get my physician’s permission before I call nine one one?
But, of course, the message was a warning that anyone with a history of heart attacks should avoid this medication. It’s a simple case of a misplaced modifier.
How about this twisted sentence?
The new student sat in the corner seat wearing blue running shoes.
Wish I could have seen that chair tying its shoes.
Special thanks to Dr. L. Kip Wheeler, Carson-Newman College, Jefferson, Tennessee for these two hilarious examples of misplaced modifiers.
The robber was described as a six foot-tall man with brown hair and blue eyes and a mustache weighing 150 pounds.
That thief must have had a…
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August 4, 2014 · 11:42 pm
Violet’s Vibes has useful tips for writers. Her July 10th post was titled, “Memoirs–Facts or Fables?” Check it out at violetsvibes.wordpress.com/2014/07/10memoirs-facts-or-fables/